You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude to the
school
and staff for allowing me to participate in the Bakery Course that you offered. What I liked the most about the curriculum is that I can do different designs and shapes of it depending on my liking. I
also
enjoy doing the precise measurements of the ingredients,
although
nervous, that I might mistakes. After I finished the course, I can't stop baking at my place and I always bought ingredients before I get home from
school
. The course for me was a great one and I learned a lot from it. Recently, I can't stop watching a cooking show in which participants are Asian. Their cuisine is unique compared to what I used to. The show is pretty popular among my peers in cooking. It would be interesting to try and learn their dishes. The
school
can add it to their lessons and I'll surely enrol in no time. Once again, thank you for imparting me the knowledge and I hope the
school
consider my request. Yours faithfully, Angel Dy
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