You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear
Mr.
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and
Mrs.
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Mrs
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Black, I'm writing
this
letter to explain the reason for the noises that may inconvenience you and to convey my apology for the disturbance. On coming Sunday, I am going to have a student concert at my university. I and my friends will perform 3 songs that I wrote for the lecturers and our fellow students. The concert is held only once a year and it is our only chance to express our talents to our professors from the music department who can
also
be our potential producers. Some of them are used to producing albums for our senior students and letting them explore their successful careers in the music industry. So,
this
is our highest chance to prove our potential to get on the professional track. I fully understand that we are making some noises till late at night these days and I'm truly sorry if it makes you any inconvenience. In order to avoid disturbing situations, we will limit our practice hours to 7pm at the latest.
Besides
, we will
also
turn the volume down even in
daytime
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.
However
, the concert date is
also
approaching and all our practice sessions will be over right on the coming Sunday afternoon. Again, please accept my sincere apology for your inconvenience and thank you so much for your understanding. Best wishes, Zay Yar Myint.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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