Charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the percentage of

water

utilized for industrial, agricultural, and domestic use in six countries of the world. Overall, the most significant amount of

water

is spent

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farming even though there

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manufactory contributed to the highest purposes in two other places.

Water

employed for agriculture is the most dominant need in some areas including Central

Asia

, Africa, Southeast

Asia

, and South America. Among other countries, Central

Asia

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the highest percentage, at 89%.

, even though domestic use is the least popular

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water

usage in Central

Asia

and Southeast

Asia

, its trend is reversed

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Africa and South America. With regards to the remaining

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water

purposes, industrial use comprises of significant rate in two other regions (North America and Europe) which

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stood at 53% and 49% respectively. The same trend is accounted for

agricultural

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the agricultural

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sector, while domestic purpose is the fewest proportion of

water

utility.

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