You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Amritsar, Punjab. I am writing

this

letter in regards to a recent issue of your magazine where some misinformation was printed. In the magazine, the article states that Amritsar has little to no public transportation services.

This

is completely incorrect. My city has 24/7 public bus services, as well as a well, developed local train network. Amritsar is a tourist and there are many people like me who make their living because of tourism. As

such

, the wrong details in an international travel journal can easily hurt the local economy.

Therefore

, I am including a detailed time schedule for public transportation as well as their website portal. I hope that your company can verify the details and print a correction along with correcting information on your website. Awaiting a quick response. Yours truly, Jagbir

Submitted by 063pinderkaursandhu1997 on Sat Aug 06 2022

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Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem ?

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