A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter, Thank him/her for the invitation. Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit

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Dear Hardeep, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and spirits. It is really nice to hear about your holiday plans for me. I am overjoyed to hear from you. From your letter, it seems it will be a great vacation. Thank you for

this

wonderful invitation. But, my brother is getting married

this

winter. My family just recently fixed the wedding date. I was in the process of sending a wedding invitation when I got your offer. I am sorry! I cannot come to Australia

this

winter. On a positive note, my family and I will be delighted if you would make it to the marriage on the 26th of December.

Therefore

, if possible, I would like to visit you

summer. Awaiting your response. Lots of love, Jagbir.

Submitted by 063pinderkaursandhu1997 on Thu Aug 04 2022

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 9.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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