There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising ?

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more and more evidence
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activities
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of human making the temperature of
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is
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higher.
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then
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put forward some feasible solutions to address them. In reality, there are many man-made activities
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causes
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the global temperature
rising
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. Despite these issues, some possible measures are suggested to
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these problems. In conclusion,
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the rising temperature on the earth, there
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variety
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of solutions to deal with these issues and
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achieve a reduction in global temperatures.
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