Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause, and what are the solution?
In the cutting-edge era,
workforce
became a competitive domain which is very hard to getAdd an article
the workforce
.
In the field of Change preposition
into.
workings
, Replace the word
work
older
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the older
employer
have to Fix the agreement mistake
employers
work
with youngster
equally. Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
This
situation can create some problems including reducing work
sprit
and Correct your spelling
spirit
this
problem
can be solved by separating their duty.
To begin
with, working two generations together can decrease working Correct your spelling
spirit
sprit
. Correct your spelling
spirit
Youngster
are more fit to Fix the agreement mistake
Youngsters
work
speedily than old
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the old
tribe
. Fix the agreement mistake
tribes
Moreover
, older
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an older
the older
citizen
who Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
need
employment Change the verb form
needs
Add a missing verb
do have
have
not Change the verb form
has
ability
as much as Correct article usage
the ability
younger
have which can make a barrier to Correct article usage
the younger
work
Correct your spelling
together
togther
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together
Add the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
it can Correct your spelling
affect
effect
badly Correct your spelling
affect
on
Change preposition
apply
companies
progress. Change noun form
companies'
company's
This
may lead to
a Change preposition
apply
company
to reduce
Change the verb form
reducing
their
profit. Correct pronoun usage
its
For example
, people
who are elder have less physical power than younger. Medical
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The medical
practitioner
said that at Fix the agreement mistake
practitioners
the
later Correct article usage
a
age
peoples
lose their 60% health strength. By which I mean that an older citizen can not Fix the agreement mistake
people
work
like a younger pupil. Because of this
, a company
get Add an article
a little
little
working hour to an older man which can curtail Correct quantifier usage
few
company
development. Therefore
, for this
reason, working two genesis
together can Change to a plural noun
geneses
detrimental
Add a missing verb
be detrimental
for
Change preposition
to
company
.
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the company
This
problem
can be solved by separating their duty
Fix the agreement mistake
duties
Change preposition
with regards
regards
to their Fix the agreement mistake
regard
age
and capacity. Younger blood who are more powerful can work
where the company
needs a more capable person; on the other hand
, older people
whose
Correct pronoun usage
who
worked
are more experienced and can Replace the word
work
work
where the company
requires a more skilled person. This
may help to maintain working balance resulting in enlarged people
who need to work
can worked
freely with youth and Change the form of the verb
work
also
company
have bo possibility to face deleterious condition. For instance
, in
the transportation sector of a Change preposition
apply
company
can be maintained by youngsters and older people
can be responsible for financial management departments. By doing these, company
will get Add an article
the company
same
working hours from two genesis as well as older Correct article usage
the same
people
who need work
can meet their demand.
Furthermore
, government
can play a big role to Add an article
the government
solved
Change the form of the verb
solve
this
problem
by creating regulations and providing Correct your spelling
allowance
allowence
for older Correct your spelling
allowance
people
who need work
. Those
Change preposition
For those
people
who need employment at the
later Correct article usage
a
age
giving money for their livelihood can solved
Change the verb form
solve
this
problem
. Administration can create a role that after a specific age
people
have to retired
and Change the verb
retire
also
company
should have to provide Add an article
the company
a
enlarged stipend for them so that they can sustain their Change the article
an
dalily
life which Correct your spelling
daily
give
them no pressure to Change the verb form
gives
work
. To illustrate, in our military force, we seen
that they provide Change the form of the verb
see
ration
and Fix the agreement mistake
rations
a
lucrative money to their officer who Remove the article
apply
are
elder and retired. By doing these, older Change the verb form
is
people
can spend their life easily
as well as they have not Replace the word
easier
compete
in workforce with younger and Change the verb form
competed
also
in their place more
younger can Change the word
apply
work
which is beneficial.
In conclusion, old peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
whom
need employment can find energy variation by working with old Change the pronoun
who
people
. But this
problem
can be solved by dividing their responsibilities. In last
, working with old and young people
simultaneously can diminish the number of unemployment
.Replace the word
unemployed
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