A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sandun, I hope

this

finds you good. In your

last

letter, you asked me to give you some advice about summer camping. I am glad

this

time you have chosen what really suits you. Since you are a photographer with a born talent, I am sure you will find

this

an opportunity to take some snaps of wildlife.

That is

what you are really good at and I am sure you will enjoy it, a lot

this

time. Though you will be enjoying capturing the wonderful moments of wildlife, there is a possibility that may suffer from the sweltering heat.

That is

the main disadvantage that I see. Please make sure you take to take some additional clothes to cover up yourself while you stay outside. I wish I could join you

this

time, but due to some urgent office, I may not be able to join. But I will try my best to join you. Let me stop here. Write again if you need any more information. Thank you, Supun

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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