The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables below
reveals
how Change the verb form
reveal
differed
about Replace the word
different
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
and bananas
in 1999 and 2004.
At first sight, it can be clearly seen that Switzerland was placed on the highest about
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apply
the
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apply
sales
of coffee
and the UK
also
had the largest sales
of bananas
in 1999. The notice features are, by the time of 2004, the UK
business rocketed at both coffee
and bananas
; made
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making
UK
the biggest business in Correct article usage
the UK
coffee
and bananas
, compared to Switzerland, the revenue of coffee
went two times and five times for bananas
.
Moreover
, the three other nations
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nations'
sales
were significantly fewer in a comparison with UK
and Switzerland in 2004. All of them had a slightly
growth in Change the adverb
slight
coffee
and except Denmark, the others two fell gentlely
in Correct your spelling
gently
bananas
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