The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below
reveals
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reveal
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how
differed
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different
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about
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
in 1999 and 2004. At first sight, it can be clearly seen that Switzerland was placed on the highest
about
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the
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apply
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sales
of
coffee
and the
UK
also
had the largest
sales
of
bananas
in 1999. The notice features are, by the time of 2004, the
UK
business rocketed at both
coffee
and
bananas
;
made
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UK
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the UK
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the biggest business in
coffee
and
bananas
, compared to Switzerland, the revenue of
coffee
went two times and five times for
bananas
.
Moreover
, the three other
nations
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sales
were significantly fewer in a comparison with
UK
and Switzerland in 2004. All of them had a
slightly
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growth in
coffee
and except Denmark, the others two fell
gentlely
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gently
in
bananas
.
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