You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - say which points in the article you agree with - explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres - offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to your recent
article
on "
Town
centres
throughout the country", in
the
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Times newspaper. Unfortunately, some of the details in the
article
were not accurate, and I would like to offer some feedback. Undoubtedly, the
article
was a nice piece that gave
general
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idea about the
town
centres
in India. The details on the outlook of buildings are quite appropriate, and I got to know about a lot of new things. The column
also
mentioned
about
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the area used for
town
centres
, and again, I very well agree with what has been written. There are,
however
, a few things which I do not agree with. Jaipur is my hometown, and its
town
centre is not similar to others in the country, in terms of its architecture. Particularly, when you go inside you will find out the intricate detailing on its walls that state the ancient stories. Apart from that, the
town
centre was designed by a
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famous
famour
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famous
Persian architect in the year 2003;
Therefore
, I am certain that it is nothing like others. It would be great if you could make these corrections in your
article
when you release the
next
column on
town
centres
. You would be really happy to look around my city, which is a hub of cultural and heritage sites. I will be obliged to give you a guided tour. I hope my suggestions will help you with your
next
column. Yours faithfully, Jay Arora
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