Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital. - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. - give details of when you would be available for this work.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in regards to the

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advertisment

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in the local newspaper from the hospital seeking

for

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people who can work unpaid during their free time. I have recently moved to

this

city and currently working with an IT company as a receptionist. From my school days, I always volunteer during my leisure time for social community

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and was looking for

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opportunity

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an oppurtunity

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oppurtunity

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opportunity

this

new place. Upon seeing

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requirement, I thought

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would be an amazing service that I can get involved with. As I mentioned above, since I am experienced to manage the reception area, I can provide the same role in

this

medical facility. I can attend telephone calls; politely speak to the patients and their guests; hospital

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management; and

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administration tasks.

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, note that I can be quite

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helpful

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helpful

with some account

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as I majored in that subject. I am available over the weekends on Saturdays between 08.00 AM to 05.00 PM and on Sundays between 08.00 AM to 01.00 PM.

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, I have attached my CV and certificates for your reference, please review

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let me know whether my profile suits your needs. I am looking forward to

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from you. Thank you. Yours Sincerely

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