You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Mom and Dad , Hello! I am hale and hearty and hope you are sailing in the same boat . I am writing

this

letter to invite you to my convocation which is going to be held

week. Well, I am so glad to tell you that I have completed my 3 years of degree in bachelors of computer applications

this

month . I know you both feel so proud of me as I have cleared my examination with good marks . You both encouraged me whenever I felt demotivated during these years . Anyhow, the ceremony will be held on the 4th of august and its starting time will be around 10 am . So, you must be there in half an hour .

Moreover

, my college allotted a dress code according to which dad would have to wear formal clothes and mom should be in traditional attire. My college has provided four tickets to each student to invite their family members .

Therefore

, two tickets are for both of you and two are for my brother and sister. I really want to meet all of you as we do not meet for so long . I am very excited about the coming week's ceremony . Hope to see you soon . Yours truly, Gurinder Kaur Grewal .

Submitted by Kaurgurinder1905 on Thu Jul 07 2022

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