You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points: 1) What is the article about? 2) What is the error? 3) What you expect an editor to do?

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Dear

, I am writing

this

letter to you to draw your attention to my concern about the recent essay, published by your newspaper.

last

week I read an essay about

Ahmadi who is a manager of a charity institute and his institute. actually, I completely know him and his family.

Also

, I know his activities which are in the charity field and providing funds for poorly students. I found you mentioned

Ahmadi helped others with amounts of money collected by ordinary people.

however

, I completely know, that he invested some things from his family wealth,

then

is spend all benefit of those investments on poor people. So I will expect your editor to do more research about her articles and after more evaluation publish them.

moreover

, you should provide a new essay and correct your idea about

Ahmadi. Thank you for taking your time and your consideration of my letter. I looking forward will read your new explanation. Yours sincerely, Salehi

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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