You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points: 1) What is the article about? 2) What is the error? 3) What you expect an editor to do?

Dear
Mr
, I am writing
this
letter to you to draw your attention to my concern about the recent essay, published by your newspaper.
last
week I read an essay about
Mr
Ahmadi who is a manager of a charity institute and his institute. actually, I completely know him and his family.
Also
, I know his activities which are in the charity field and providing funds for poorly students.  I found you mentioned
Mr
Ahmadi helped others with amounts of money collected by ordinary people.
however
, I completely know, that he invested some things from his family wealth,
then
is spend all benefit of those investments on poor people. So I will expect your editor to do more research about her articles and after more evaluation publish them.
moreover
, you should provide a new essay and correct your idea about
Mr
Ahmadi. Thank you for taking your time and your consideration of my letter. I looking forward will read your new explanation. Yours sincerely, Salehi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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