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An English – speaking friend wants to spend two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Offer to find somewhere to stay • Give advice about what to do • Give information about what clothes to bring

#english #friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes
Dear Nila, I am so thrilled to hear that you are going to come to Istanbul sooner rather than later. I never forgot
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 hospitality you extended to me when I visited the city
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where
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 you reside
in
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. I felt completely pampered. Anyway, the reason I am writing is that you are enlightened concerning
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 of the territory that I live in.
Although
 you conceive that the best accommodation
is
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in
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the
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a
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 hotel room,
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I recommend you
getting
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voucher
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a voucher
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 from Airbnb Site –
online
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an online
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 marketplace for rental lodging and homestays being not only upmarket but
also
 affordable. By the way, breakfast and hygiene services are inclusive. If you want to be assured, you should read the reviews written by the
travelers
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in
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on
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 the site. Perhaps, it would be
delighted
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 to
seeing
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 historical places
such
 as
palaces’
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palaces
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Turkish
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of Turkish
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 nobility, museums and art galleries which portray ancient culture.
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, Istanbul has the reputation of being served delicious foods as well as
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a firework
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firework
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fireworks
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. There are immense shopping malls which are replete
of
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with
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 various brands ranging from low
price
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prices
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 to high
price
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. Since
date
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the date
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 of your journey is in spring, hospitable weather obviates the need for the warm clothes ;
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, You should bring
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an ample
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 skirt, short jean, and
dress
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a dress
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 that are suitable for sightseeing. I look forward to seeing you Warm wishes, Sania
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