You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, The purpose of writing

this

letter is to inform you

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regarding

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mistake in the article published

last

month

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on ‘’Inform

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magazine’’ page no. 23 Oldest university. The latest edition of your travel magazine included an article

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Cambridge university

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the oldest in the world and it was

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established

establised

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established

in 1209. But the fact is Oxford is the oldest

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speaking university which was founded in 1096. A magazine

such

as yours has a good reputation

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among

amoung

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among

the international tourist and individuals alike. It is very important that the fact and information should be checked prior to

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publication. I feel that

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at least

atleast

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at least

in the

publication the article is to be republished and make

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apology note and provide

correction

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with factual information before sending for

final

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print. Yours faithfully, Hiren

Dhanwani

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Dhawan

Submitted by hirendhanwani on Sat Jul 02 2022

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