Write a letter to the organizer of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my concerns about the annually occurred festival in our town. As we all know, there has been held an annual festival, "The Family Gala", which has lots of fun and entertainment for the families.

Last

year, I visited it and witnessed the exciting activities which were going on over there. One of the best things I enjoyed a lot, is the variety of food stalls and different rides.

Moreover

, despite the difficult task to handle a large crowd of people, I found a great ambience and the maintenance and cleaning of the place were up to the mark. Because of excellent management and increased workload, I would like to actively participate in volunteering the management

this

year to manage daily routine tasks and extend my services to support staff. You are requested to please let me know about the exact date of opening of the event, the skills I need to have in order to take part, the jobs and responsibilities which I will have to perform and the timings of the festival. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours' Faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on Wed Jun 29 2022

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