Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction related with a knowledge competition related to drug abuse topic which was held during the month of April. I was very keen when I read about

this

essay writing contest in your esteemed newspaper. After checking my eligibility to participate, I

also

send my entry to

this

competition and fortunately, my essay won 1st position in it.

However

, It has been two months since that day when the results are announced but still I did not get any award till now. As it is clearly mentioned in the guidelines, the person who got the

first

rank will be given a trophy as well as a monetary prize of 10,000/- within a week. Yet, I did not receive any confirmation for the same.

Also

, I had sent all the documents demanded by the authorities yet I got no reward for attaining that position. Though I contacted the helpline number, I get no response from them.

Thus

, It would be really commendable if you could please look into

this

matter so that I and the other contestants can get their rewards. I am hoping that you will take

this

matter into your kind consideration and make arrangements for the timely disposal of the award money to the participants. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important discuss both these view and give your opinion.

In some places there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is best both for individual and society. do you agree or disagree?

Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?