With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globaly, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

It is undoubtedly true that a distance between family members has brought prominent problems to mankind's life in recent decades. What is significant is the fact that divorce rates and family breakdowns have increased significantly. The following essay tends to explore two primary causes and solutions (

such

as) (regarding these issues

such

as) social

media

and being too busy as well as listening to an expert relationship counsellor. It is undoubtedly true that social

media

have separated family members significantly which causes a lack of sympathy and corrupts the family's atmosphere. Social

media

was the best invention of mankind,

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it is the main reason for family separations. Nowadays, most families spend most of their

time

on social

media

chatting with their friends

instead

of having a word with their family members. As an illustration, think about a father who spends most of his

time

on social

media

over breeding his children. It is evident that those children have no one to protect them against any danger,

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those children may get corrupted by drugs,bad friends and so on.

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, nowadays due to work hours and high expenditures, families don't spend enough

time

with each other. Alternatively, they start getting apart and

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their relationship dies.

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and even more importantly, a councillor or a family member with huge influence can solve the family's problems and reinforce their relationship. Councillors are taking an important action toward parents. The main point is, that sometimes there are many unsaid speeches which bother the father and mother of the family .An expert adviser will help them to understand each other better and solve their major problems with mere talking. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that these distances are needed to be solved immediately,

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everyone will be damaged somehow. It is recommended that councillors allocate

time

to reinforcing families' relationships.