Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In global, a large number of oldster are doing their job from

home

while some children starting to

study

from

home

due to

technology

has become a complacent item and acceptable.

Technology

is a crucial tool that all

of

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people

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the people

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in the world can utilize simply.

Also

, many things that

people

can get from it. Workers and students nowadays tend to consume the internet to learn or search

many

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for many

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things which are related

with

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to

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their subject easily. Even though they are still at

home

, they can obtain advantages. To show the evidence for

this

case, either teenagers or adults studying and working from

home

and

they

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utilize their computers to look for anything

that is

related to their course.

However

, the adverse of

technology

for both workers and

student

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students

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who

doing

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do

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their activities at

home

are

lack

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a lack

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of

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and more indolent to move or exercise. There are several

people

who

work

from

home

and devote their time almost whole the day in front of

screen

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the screen

a screen

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.

As a result

, they lose their society and lack

of

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interaction with their family and friend because they just spend

much

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a lot of

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time with their

work

by computer.

Moreover

, some children feel lazier to do another activity because they have

been

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found an effective way to

study

by computer.

For example

, a large of children

subsequently

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who subsequently

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know about the internet and

study

with

computer

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computers

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tend to be indolent to move or

doing

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do

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some exercise. To conclude, it is believed that

technology

has many

advantage

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advantages

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to

work

or

study

, especially for

student

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students

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and

worker

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workers

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who have

a

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jobs or activities that should do at

home

.

Technology

is a satisfactory

tools

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tool

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that

people

easier to use for their

work

.