The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee

and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables compare the
datas
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data
about the
sales
of the two items, Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana, in the year 1999 and 2004 in five
countries
, namely
UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Overall
, after a five years period,
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee showed some inclines for all five
countries
.
Although
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Bananas
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Bananas’
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Banana’
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sales
increased
for
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in
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some
countries
, there are some losses
of
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in
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marketing in
few
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a few
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countries
of fives. With regard to coffee, the UK had the highest growth of income,increasing
18.5
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by 18.5
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million
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millions
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million
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of
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euros, for a 5 years gap
while
Switzerland doubled coffee’s
sales
from 3 to 6
millions
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million
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.
Coffee’s
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Coffee
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demand in Belgium
also
increased a little more and interestingly, the rise for Denmark and Sweden showed the same gap of
millions
of euros. For bananas, the most grown market is in Switzerland which is up to 32
millions
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million
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of rise.
Sales
in the UK and Belgium jumped about 3 to 4
millions
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million
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.Sadly, Sweden and Denmark’s banana markets fell some points to the digits and the most dropped one is Denmark
which
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sales
didn’t reach even 1 million in 2004.
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