You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which point in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir/Madam

This

is regarding the article you published on 20nd May, regarding the

town

centres, according to which all the

town

centres in the country look similar.

However

, I am not in complete support of it. I agree with you that the central part of the city is crowded and has traffic congestion like all the major cities and it usually gets worse during the evening hours.

However

, the centre of my city is different from the other cities in many ways. It has outdoor public seating spaces within every 100m distance for people who need to take some rest.

Also

, the

town

centre is built in a circle around a huge community park which is quite accessible from any point which makes the environment friendly. If you are interested I would be glad to give you a tour of my

town

in which I can introduce you to many more interesting local things. Along with that, I can

also

, guide you regarding the historical facts about the place. Yours Faithfully Hannah.

Submitted by hansa.pandit11 on Sun Jun 12 2022

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