You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to tell you I was reading your magazine and I understand your information have a few problems for

this

reason I decided to send my publication about my hometown.I have been living in my hometown since 2010.

that is

why I need to help together for fix problems.

firstly

, I have to tell you my city name has a spelling mistake and I want to correct that and

second

, I believe my city has more than 100000 population and you should research about

this

topic.

moreover

, for us extremely essential for the magazine to give correct info because we have just one magazine in our town and we must keep them by increase rate correct data for

this

sake of I am writing

this

letter to you.one more point, you are entirely good for

this

reason I want to say thank you for your hard work.

However

, I suggest you for the raising the level of journal research among citizens. Do let me know at the earliest possible convenience. writing for your reply. Yours faithfully, Saeed foroghi nia

Submitted by saeedforoghi538 on Fri Jun 10 2022

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