You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue.

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Dear John, Hope you are doing great!. I am writing

this

letter to convey my apologies for breaking the wireless

keyboard

that I borrowed from you the

last

month. Your brand new

keyboard

helped me to accomplish my project on time;

however

, I have accidentally broken it, my sincere apologies for the damage. To explain

further

, When I am working

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a balcony

unexpectadly

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unexpectedly

dropped your

keyboard

to the ground floor due to which all the keys on a

keyboard

are disassembled and some are broken. I know how important

this

device is for you personally and professionally. To compensate for

this

I have ordered a new product online which got an

exiciting

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exciting

in-built voice assistance,

this

item will be delivered within

week to your home address. Hope you enjoy the latest version of your new

keyboard

. Your's lovingly, Rana

Submitted by rana on Wed Jun 08 2022

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue.

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