You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Mr Nolan; I hope you are doing fine and everything goes well with you. Based on your request, I would like to express my feeling and, feedback about your cookery class in the following paragraphs.
First
of all, I would like to thank you. Thank you for
this
great opportunity. I had the honour to be in your class and learn from you. I enjoyed every minute of your class. Especially, the time we had to taste our food. I remember it was the most fun and, scariest time of the whole
course
. After graduation, everybody in our family calls me “Gordon Ramsy Junior”. I can say thanks to you, now my little daughter eats breakfast and sometimes she is even looking for more! I made plenty of dishes for my family and, friends. Nowadays, when they carve for different cuisine, they are not looking in Uber Eats, they simply call me!
However
, I believe the school is missing one cookery
course
and
that is
“bakery”. I personally will be the
first
person who signs up for
this
course
. I know you have an experience with
this
major,
therefore
, please add
this
course
to the school. In the end, I would like to thank you for everything. I followed you on Instagram, so I can learn more about your tricks. Yours Sincerely Mohammad Lesani
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