You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: – Why you are writing – What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together – Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Hello Josiah, How have you been doing? Hope you and your family are doing well It’s a very long time since we have not met each other. I am writing

this

letter to let you remind you had left your belongings like a pants belt, a hankey, and one t-shirt, in my house on your

last

visit on my birthday. I was cleaning my room; where I found a bag with your belongings, I remembered that to return, but due to my hectic schedule of work, I forgot to remind and send you it. Remember,

last

2 years ago, we met at my birthday party, you and your family visited our house and we celebrated in a hotel and we visited many places near to our city and we had fun a lot. I sincerely apologise for reminding you about your left belonging and now I want to make my mistake correct by sending your belongings to you immediately. Please let me know how I can return it to you or I could courier it to you at your address. Hope you would forgive me for

such

a silly mistake Your friend Rajat

Submitted by raj345355 on Sat May 28 2022

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