You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a letter the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the job of looking after your

six year old

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child during a six-month stay

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Australia. I believe I would be highly suitable for

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job, and it would be a win-win situation for us. I have been longing to visit Australia and it would be great for me to live with your family

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year since I am having a gap year. Aside from being able to view the mesmerizing sceneries and have the delicious crocodile soup, I would be much obliged

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I given the opportunity to look after your child as well. I would surely enjoy the precious opportunity to travel around various places

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Australia with him. I have

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experience in

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assure you that I will do a great job. I hope that your family is doing excellent these days.

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, I look forward to receiving your prompt reply and I would be glad to meet you soon! Thank you! Yours faithfully, Matt Ng

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a letter the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes of these changes and suggest ways to prepare people for work in the future.

Government should spend more on railways than roads. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.?

More and more people are moving away from agriculture background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?