You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a letter the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to
applying
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for the job you have been posting in the Australian magazine.Let me
introduies
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introduce
introduces
myself to you
first
! My name is Amy and I am 25
Years
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old, I am now working as a
part time
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part-time
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Chinese teacher in
a
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an
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education
center
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centre
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in
HongKong
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Hong Kong
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and have more than 7 years of teaching
expirence
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experience
.
However
, I am looking for a chance for working
hoilday
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holiday
. The students I teach
is
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around 5 to 10 years old, so looking up for 2
six year old
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six-year-old
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child would be easy for me.
In addition
, I love to stay with the kids and spend time with them since staying with children makes me feel simple and happy. I would
also
love to explore more of your culture and share mine with you as well! I can
also
teach your student of Chinese words and food if you want to! Best, Amy.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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