Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leaisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there are many

people

that work a lot and they do not have any leisure

time

in order to do activities and entertainment,

this

trend is very negative and can be harmful for a long

time

this

essay will check the positive and negative effects and I express my idea in the end. On the one hand, will examine the negative effects in

this

paragraph, today, all the

people

realized to care about

activity

and everyone try to be healthy than before ,

thus

, as we can see a big part of society tend to go to the gym and other

activity

especially

this

is very common among of young

people

furthermore

, not only they want to choose sports but

also

they know that

this

is very vital for their body,

also

, lack of

activity

can lead to many diseases in the future,

for example

, I worked with the computer for a long

time

and I am suffering from an illness which is known as the abs, if I want to definition abs I can say

this

is a disorder which is related to lack of

activity

In contrast

, some

people

prefer to work for a long

time

and they likely received more money than other

people

but there is one point they do not have any

time

that spends on their family event for themselves,

in addition

, we are working in order to provide welfare for themselves and their family,

otherwise

people

should spend money for their diseases, as well as, they can not make a diary with their relatives,

for instance

, who spend many times in outside can not have love with close family and always stay alone. In conclusion,

this

is a negative topic and

people

have to choose a sport for leisure

time

and should not allocate their whole

time

to work.

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Fully explain your ideas

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