You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a letter the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing

this

letter to kindly provide my interest in working as a child-care responsible, due to your advertisement in the local magazine. It would be efficient if knew, that I was working as a baby seater for three years with a Spanish family in Sydney which had a couple of toddlers until they had to leave Australia for another country whereas, I still have a nice relationship with them I had to look for a new job and in these three years of my professional career life I have promoted my language skills to three languages beside Persian which is my native language, I have the national certificate of kids caring which I have attached to the letter. I would really appreciate it if you consider me for the aforementioned position so I could spend my free time expanding and learning

further

skills like learning new languages and trying to cook delicious food for children

besides

helping them do their school assignments. You can easily contact me whit my phone number, if you need more information or let me know If I am appropriate for the job. Yours faithfully Masi-Dehbashi Phone number:07644455322

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a letter the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

The Greeting

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