Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

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There is a line graph which provides information about using the underground station in London for several periods of time. Overall numbers fluctuate from 100 to 400

passengers

but it can be seen that the highest statistics are at 8:00 and at 18:00.

Also

there are the lowest points at 6:00 and 16:00. At 6:00 the number of

passengers

at the station is about 100 people

then

it increased in 2 times at 7:00.

Also

figures had a skyrocket to 400

passengers

at 8:00.

Besides

, the number of

passengers

had a dip almost to 150 at the period from 8:00 to 10:00 but after it slightly increased to 200

passengers

. During the period from 11:00 to 14:00 there was a surge to 300.

However

then

it declined significantly to 100 and it hit the lowest point of data. After that figures showed upward trend to almost 400

passengers

during the period from 16:00 to 18:00.

Also

it decreased to almost 100 and

then

fluctuated to 150.

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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Include an introduction and conclusion

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.