To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The population of
world
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the world
increase
day by day, while it decreases the accessibility of food which is related to population. To provide food to the Replace the word
increasing
people
especially who
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those who
lives
in, developing or poor countries, the government should find new solutions Change the verb form
live
such
as consuming edible insects
. However
, some may not prefer this
consumption, due to its taste or the health effect on a person
body. In Change noun form
person's
this
essay
I will consider both advantages and disadvantages of consuming Add a comma
,essay
insects
.
The two main advantages of eating insects
are it feeds people
easily and it also
allows to
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for
opportunity
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opportunities
gastronomy
sector. Add an article
the gastronomy
Firstly
, changing the
eating habits may be Change the word
your
though
in order to just fill your stomach. Correct your spelling
tough
However
, in the long term
it will save many Add a comma
,term
people
dying
from starvation Change preposition
from dying
also
even the
taste is not good it includes Correct word choice
if the
large
amount of protein and in Change the article
a large
a
regular Correct article usage
apply
consumption
it can be healthy Add a comma
,consumption
also
. Secondly
, after the consumption of bites is become
widespread, some entrepreneurs would get Change to the active voice
becomes
has become
in
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into
this
sector, and it create
recruitment opportunity. Change the verb form
creates
For example
, opening a factory in the
poorer country can be Correct article usage
a
solution
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the solution
a solution
of
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to
starving
and poorness.
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starvation
However
, this
habit comes with it
bad sides. The major drawback can be separated Correct pronoun usage
its
to
two main parts, the psychological Change preposition
into
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effects
affects
of consuming edible Correct your spelling
effects
insects
, and physical
results Correct article usage
the physical
after
consuming these creatures recklessly. Change preposition
of
People
have eating habits since we choose settled life. And except some
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for some
cultures
most Add a comma
,cultures
of
the races would not choose consuming Change preposition
apply
insects
. For instance
, if it becomes compulsory to survive some people
may think it is not humanistic
and Add an article
a humanistic
adverse
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the adverse
effect
of Fix the agreement mistake
effects
this
start to observe. Moreover
, government
should be careful about Add an article
the government
the
how it must be consumed. They should make various research to conclude arguments about the unhealthiness of these Correct article usage
apply
insects
. Without research and information
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,information
people
may suffer from consuming this
.
Consequently
, although
make
a habit of eating Wrong verb form
making
insects
have
so many positive Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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effects
affects
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effects
to
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on
people
and it is still not considered issue
. It involves many risks right now but it can Add an article
the issue
an issue
be change
after enough research and circumstances. For a now, I wouldn’t prefer to consume these Change the verb form
be changed
insects
but if government
informed me about what kind of benefit it is, my opinion might be Correct article usage
the government
change
.Wrong verb form
changed
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