You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter .Say which points in the article you agree with .Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers .Offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
to express my disagreement with your views in the article about the
town
centers
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in my country, which was published in Sunday Times on 25th April
,
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2022. In your article, you mentioned that the
town
centers
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in Pakistan are extremely identical and have nothing different to offer.
Although
you are right
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the
generelization
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generalization
of food, sitting areas and the rush.
However
, if we dig deep there are stark contrasts in all the
town
centers
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. To illustrate my point, Islamabad
town
center
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is the hub of all
tradaitional
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traditional
cuisines from different provinces which is not
availble
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available
in Lahore or Karachi
centers
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.
Moreover
, in the
middle
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there are huge empty spaces for families to sit and enjoy their time, and ample parking lots are
availble
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available
, so it does not matter how many people come to the
city
center
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.
Also
, all the big brands have their outlets in Islamabad
city
center
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.
Lastly
, I would like to invite you to my
city
in the
summers
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. I hope you would enjoy your visit to our downtown, and we could
also
discover some new exhilarating places around the
city
. Kindly inform me about your
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availability
so that
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plan the schedule
accordingly
. Thanking in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Kamal Khan
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