You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter .Say which points in the article you agree with .Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers .Offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

to express my disagreement with your views in the article about the

town

centers

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in my country, which was published in Sunday Times on 25th April

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2022. In your article, you mentioned that the

town

centers

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in Pakistan are extremely identical and have nothing different to offer.

Although

you are right

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the

generelization

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generalization

of food, sitting areas and the rush.

However

, if we dig deep there are stark contrasts in all the

town

centers

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. To illustrate my point, Islamabad

town

center

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is the hub of all

tradaitional

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traditional

cuisines from different provinces which is not

availble

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available

in Lahore or Karachi

centers

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Moreover

, in the

middle

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there are huge empty spaces for families to sit and enjoy their time, and ample parking lots are

availble

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available

, so it does not matter how many people come to the

city

center

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Also

, all the big brands have their outlets in Islamabad

city

center

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Lastly

, I would like to invite you to my

city

in the

summers

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summer

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. I hope you would enjoy your visit to our downtown, and we could

also

discover some new exhilarating places around the

city

. Kindly inform me about your

availibility

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availability

so that

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plan the schedule

accordingly

. Thanking in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Kamal Khan

Submitted by welcomeblissfullife on Tue Apr 26 2022

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