Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world, it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people think that marry for
love
and
in contrast
otherone's
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other one's
other's
opinion
this
fact not true, so
clevers
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clever
cleavers
marry for money. If we try
comparison
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comparing
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love
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to love
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and money factors,
majority
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the majority
a majority
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say that
love
is true, I'm ready everything for
love
and etc.
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,Bu
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Bu
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But
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it is not
such
as.
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That's
That
Thats
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fact, money is a lot of
thing
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things
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but not anything. Wealthy is not lucky. Usually, luxury life desire
women's
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women
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.
Some
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In some
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cases men like that
such
as
easy
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an easy
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way for
rich
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a rich
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life, too. These types
marrys
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marry
marries
similary
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similarly
similar
to
alliance
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the alliance
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. One
of
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apply
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side
want
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wants
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to be
welathy
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wealthy
healthy
which is he or she doesn't like
suffer
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to suffer
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for yourself wishes. The most cases these "alliances",
someones
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someone's
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name that marries does not durable. Whereas
love
is perpetuate
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is perpetuated
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.
This
sense is fabulous. If you fall in
love
you feel life is how much
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worth
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worthy
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itworthy
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.
Consequently
, I think that only
love
is true.
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