The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of the three kinds of nutrients( sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar) in four types of meals, which are all extremely unhealthy
to
our human body.
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Overall
, people eat the highest proportion of bad nutrients in
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dinner
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snacks, lunch, and breakfast. Despite people Change preposition
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with higher percentages of sodium and saturated fat than others, they ate more added sugar in snacks.
The percentages of sodium in several kinds of meals( Fix the agreement mistake
dinners
dinner
, lunch, snack, breakfast) are 43%, 29%, 14%, and 14%, respectively. Those of saturate
fat have Change the form of the verb
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the
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situation when it comes to added sugar, people ate more of it in snacks (42%) than in Add an article
a different
dinner
(23%), lunch(19%), and breakfast(16%), respectively.Submitted by rruby6120tw on
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