An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Sasi, I hope you and your family are all doing well. I’m really happy that you planningnning to be here for spending your two-week vacation.

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, I’m really sorry that as you know well that I have my University exams during your visit so I’m not able to meet you when you are there. I suggested you that stay in Residency Hotel which is more comfortable and

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the tariff rates are reasonable. Don’t forget that there is a complimentary breakfast

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provided there. You can plan to visit the temple and

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the garden. You

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told me that you

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plan

go trucking in the Vellinigiri hills. I advise you to cancel it because it is so rainy in the sixth and seventh hills. Even all the trucking trips were

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cancelled due to heavy rain. You can bring some rainy coats and a sweater

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since there is heavy rain and

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chill in the early morning. Hope you enjoy your vacation in my hometown. Your friend Karthi

Submitted by karthikbala85 on Sat Apr 23 2022

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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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The air travel system only benefits the rich people in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

the amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children do you think the best way to deal with the problem sir what others solution can you suggest.