Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding the column which was published in your newspaper
last
Sunday.
First
of all, I have agreed that most cities are well developed as well as all houses are in the square shapes.
Besides
this
, you did not only represent our towns effectively, but you
also
mentioned some characteristics of all big cities which seems to be correct.
However
, the information that was described my hometown was quite irrelevant because you demonstrated that my suburb was famous for art galleries and exhibitions like other urban areas. But it was a half-truth my city centre is
also
popular for music concerts that differentiate it from all other cities as most of the other locales are not arranged any kind of concerts activities. In the end, I would like to offer you a visit to my locality and see how my birthplace is quite distinct from others villages. I would really appreciate it if you could come to my place. I am looking forward to your visit to my metropolia. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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