You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir/Madam I am Suman Preet and staying in Western Road , London which is nearby a
tennis
court.I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in an advertisement for your
tennis
Program. I was very much to play
tennis
. During my school days , I participated and was acknowledged for achievement in
tennis
.After finishing school , I was not able to allocate time to developing my skill in
tennis
. when I saw your advertisement ,I remember my childhood and feel happy to get a chance to start again. A few days ago , I met with an accident and my elbow was fractured , I couldn'tmove my arm and shoulder . It is a reason ,I cannot stay the whole course in London. I hope you understand my circumstances and refund my full fee , if you want I could attach my medical report with an application and do not be hesitate for other information.  Thanks for your consideration and hope to get a positive from your side. your sincerely  Sumanpreet
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