People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming communities. What are the possible causes and solutions ?

Nowadays
people
hardly know their
neighbours
and In my vantage point, I do agree with the fact with
this
trend the healthy communities are falling apart at an alarming rate,
This
is not the case in the olden days and there are many factors affecting
this
trend to grow drastically in negative over the years. To start with, One of the significant reasons would be seeing the
neighbours
with an intention that they are strangers and if they share anything with them they might take an advantage of them .
For instance
,
like
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asking
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too often and taking their valuable time with unnecessary chitchatting sometimes when they are not in the mood to talk.Another good reason could be
people
are generally shy and hesitant , so over the years they really get habituated with an attitude of not taking to others
espeically
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especially
with
people
who live around them.
Furthermore
,having a busy work life and
inapproatiate
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inappropriate
timings
that is
quite common these days is
also
hindering the opportunities to talk with
next
door
tennants
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tenants
tenant
. As a consequence of
this
acculmated
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accumulated
acclimated
effect, of not interacting with the
neighbours
, the development of
community
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the community
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is getting
effected
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negative pace ,since it can only
will
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flourish with interaction , sharing and caring of others .
Therefore
,
Hence
people
not only often feel like, they are lonely but
also
they are less communicative to
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and
developing
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psychological problems as they
being end
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up being lonely .
However
,
Firstly
,
This
growing problem can be fixed with
simple
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greeting to their
neighbours
even though they
intailly
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initially
instantly
know each other as it breaks the ice and provides
a
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room for interaction to start with.
Secondly
, Inviting them to their houses for any events
such
as birthday parties, wedding anniversaries could
helps
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too to build the friendship and to flourish
further
into a beautiful
commounities
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communities
as more and more common friends and families will join in
this
proecess
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process
.
Lastly
, Offering a little bit of help when needed
that
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could be anything like giving hand when their car
covered
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in snow sort
of
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simple things make big difference. In conclusion,
Neighbours
are always be
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our future friends , so
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very important to give a chance to interact who are trying and to
resiprocate
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reciprocate
so that beautiful friendships happen that could
helps
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to build
to
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the
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beautiful and joyful communities .
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