As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion

To achieve milestones as a skilled business consultant and able to form well-founded strategies for sustainable corporate growth, It is crucial to have a solid foundation in each process and to keep abreast of new challenges in the current economic situation before applying any advanced strategies
such
as ESG agendas. Should be tomorrow’s trophies the preserve of people who have the best strategies?
Besides
that, human management skill is
also
imperative for my long-time goal of restructuring a family-owned business into a well-structured enterprise with explicit segregation. Ultimately, new innovative challenges and approaches from highly-developed industries are valuable for my professional growth. I can impose these ideas to create positive impacts or be well-equipped for subsequent inevitable events.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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