A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Jackson, I’m writing in response to you asking for my advice about the camping holiday. As you know I’m a big fan of camping and outdoor activities like that, and I suggest everyone at least take a shot once. By the way, I reckon that summer camping would be the best choice, because of the nice weather in summer and you can take advantage of beautiful nature and at night, you can enjoy some stargazing and stay up late at night close to the fire.

However

, I should warn you about some pitfalls you may have faced. Especially, because of the mosquitos and reptiles, you should sleep in a tent or sleeping bag. Above that, it can get cold and freezing even on summer nights in nature, and that’s another reason you should bring with you some warm clothes. It’s been a while since I’ve not been in nature, and I missed that though, if you make up your mind about

this

camping thing, let me know. I look forward to your reply. Best wishes. Ali

Submitted by alimardani1994 on Sun Apr 03 2022

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