To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some of the countries in Africa eat

insects

as food or snacks or edibles actually some believe

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part of a healthy diet. It has been a

controversal

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argument amongst the country's citizens . Most African governments where infect not able to come to a conclusion if they should approve it as part of a healthy diet or just eat it as food. So whoever eats them

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prerogative.At the same time under the same blanket

Insects

are good for our environmental cleansing in as much as they might taste good to others, they need to be considerate of our

nature

. They need to be preserved. A good

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example is my home

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country

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Zimbabwe, we have

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who eat the Mopani worms, infect

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a certain tribe called the Ndebele

people

, those are the

people

that introduced it to the rest of the other tribes, I have tried and tested the Mopani worms, they are so delicious I

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wouldn't

mind having them as an edible but because of the love

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have for

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to the point that

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feel like

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very unfair for us

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humans to eat

insects

hence

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advice

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the

people

not to eat them and sort for other edibles. 1992 was a challenging year for my nation,

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we experienced a severe drought and because of drought there was famine, it was so terrible,

people

had to sort food from

nature

and

insects

were the only meat available, our

people

started eating

insects

and it had a very negative impact on

nature

to the point that in 1993 when it rained, the

people

could not harvest their produce well because there

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insects

to help with the recycling of

nature

, that was terrible.

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a big role in

nature

, the equation of

nature

is not complete if there are no

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I want to encourage everyone to look after

nature

by not eating

insects

even if there is a famine.

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