task 1 A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer

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Dear Friend, I hope you have been doing great! I know we did not get a chance to see each other for a long time. I am glad to know that you are thinking of spending

this

summer vacation camping. I believe camping is the best use of the summer vacation for everyone. The most significant advantage of camping is that you get a chance to be familiar with people of different backgrounds and cultures.

Besides

this

, camping helps to do many recreational activities, which most people miss because of their hectic schedules.

However

, I suggest putting some medicine in the bag to prevent the impact of weather conditions and sick.

Also

, do not forget to check the weather broadcast of the place. So, you can pack appropriate clothes

accordingly

. I wish I could join you for

this

camping. Unfortunately, I am unable to take leave from my workplace. I hope you will enjoy your vacation.

sukh

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task 1 A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer

Fully explain your ideas

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children and teenagers should be punished?