You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Asad, I am Hafiz Mahmood Hussain and I have been living in your neighbour for 3 years. I am writing

this

letter to inform and invite you to a party which will be held in my home. I am moving to a new house and want to give a dinner party to my old neighbour.

First

of all, I am happy that my dream of buying a lavish house has been completed.

Therefore

, I planned to arrange dinner for my friends and some of my neighbours.

Furthermore

, I want to tell you, we will hold a music

compition

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competition

where

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and my

collegues

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colleagues

will perform. It is just for entertainment and of course music and people noise will reach your house.

Therefore

, I am sorry in advance for

this

disturbance in your sleeping.

Secondly

, as you are my

nieghbour

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neighbour

and we have

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good relationship throughout the living duration. It is my humble request that you join us and celebrate with us. Your presence will very important for me. We will

wait

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you and your family.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely, XYZ

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activities in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or a bad thing?

Modern lifestyles means that many parents have little time for their children.Many children suffer because they do not have her as much from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or did agree?