You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

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MR. John I hope you are fine and well. My self is Harish. I am your new neighbour in 8845 Home. I moved from Montreal to Brampton Two Days before. I am a Dentist's Doctor. I held a family party in my new home for my friends and Relatives on Saturday of the upcoming Week. The function will be held in the evening Time. I have already given the order of catering to a renowned restaurant in our City. There will be veg and non-veg items available in

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catering. I make a Dj system for dancing the friends and relatives. On that special

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invite you with your family. Please come on Saturday evening time and join our company and make a remember day in our life. I hope that you will accept my invitation and come on time to my celebration. I will welcome you with my warm heart. Please don’t bring any type of git. Your presence is a precious gift for me. Thanks and Regards Harish Sharma

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

The Greeting

Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problem facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenges. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Rich countries help poor countries financially. Some people, however, think that rich countries should help in other ways as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that parents should teach children how to behave. Others think that school is the best place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.