In many countries the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant examples.

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Many nations reported crimes by teenagers. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain the cause and solution with a suitable example. Many

parents

have work commitments, so they do not give proper

time

to their

children

Parents

are chasing to balance their life but they could not manage it.

As a result

, offspring went in different directions. Due to a lack of guidance and negligence by their

parents

children

are involved in unethical

activities

. Unknowingly,

children

are part of the crime.

However

parents

do not teach morally and ethically to do

such

activities

which may lose their dignity.

For example

, some pupils were found taking drugs on the street where police caught them red-handed out the school premises.

Additionally

, to come into the spotlight,

children

show off their expensive gadgets in the public. Others do not have enough money to maintain

such

status among them; they started planning to get it in the wrong way.

For Instance

, one of my neighbours registered a complaint in the police station in the case of money theft by a student. To overcome

this

problem, people should give leisure

time

to their

children

. Off work,

parents

keep an eye on their

children

's daily

activities

. Communicate with teachers and principals and ask for academic performance.

Moreover

, take vacations and plan a trip with their

children

to spend quality

time

with their

children

Also

parents

should encourage their

children

to participate in other

activities

such

as sports, music and dance. To conclude,

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parents

give more importance to their work as well as their

children

, to prevent crime,

parents

play a key role. To distract from crime,

parents

take a step ahead to spend valuable

time

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