The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart below illustrates the
percentage
of water
used for different purposes in North America, South America, Europe, Africa
, Central Asia
and South East Asia
.
In general, the percentage
of used water
has been classified into 3 different categories, industrial use
, agricultural use
and domestic use
. In the category of industrial use
, North Africa
and Europe have the most percentage
among the other 4 areas
which is 48 per cent
and 53 per cent
respectively. However
, in
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areas
such
as South Africa
, Africa
, Central Asia
and South East Asia
has the least percentage
of water
used in Industrial.
In addition
, there are four areas
that have the most perc
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water
used in agriculture in these three categories, 71 per cent
in South America, 81 per cent
in Africa
and 84 per cent
in South East Asia
. Among them, central Asia
has the biggest percentage
with 88 per cent
of the water
that has been used in agriculture.
However
, the category of domestic use
has the smallest percentage
in most areas
compared to industrial use
and agricultural use
. Interestingly, the percentage
of domestic use
water
is 2 per cent
higher than industrial use
in Africa
and central Asia
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