You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include: Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

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Dear Sir or Madam, I just found an advertisement for a

job

offer at your beautiful new

apartment

complex. I would like to introduce myself, I am currently a Unit manager for an uptown

apartment

. I have been seeking

for

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an opportunity to branch out and work on a bigger project. I am glad to

found

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out that you are looking for an

apartment

manager

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because I am confident that I would be the right one for the

job

. I have 5 years of experience in the real estate market and I hold

Bachelor

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Bachelor's

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degrees in Management and Business. I am currently working as a gym and

cafeterior

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cafeteria

supervisor for an

apartment

complex in the Uptown area. I love my

job

and always looking for a new way to advance the career ladder. Not only do I have management skills

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but,

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I am

also

familiar with the real estate game as I am the owner of a number of properties myself, including townhouses and

apartment

units. Years of experience in the industry has taught me the essential knowledge and skills for

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leading and managing. If you

are interest

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in discussing

further

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this further

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, I would be happy to set aside some

times

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so we can meet. It is better if I could see the president of the

adminstrative

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administrative

board of your

apartment

and possibly the

engeneers

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engineers

that was

incharge

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in charge

bulding

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building

the thing. It is important that I get myself familiar with the building and the working environment before I accept any

job

agreement. Looking forward to your response, Nhi

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include: Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

The Closing

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