news stories on TV and newspapers are very often accomplaint by pictures. some people say that this picture are more effective than words what is your opinion about this?

A
picture
can depict the whole story in
people
’s minds and it is more easily guide
people
to understand and remember a circumstance
instead
of reading thousands of words.
Hence
, I insist with numerous
people
’s views that it is more effective to attach pictures along with stories rather than just articles. On the one hand, a
picture
can express lots of information at
first
sight. According to the research,
people
can imagine and supplement
further
information from a
picture
which is means that readers can get as much information from a
picture
at
first
sight rather than read a whole article and to get understand the occurrence. The
picture
attached
next
to the news could attract the reader’s attention and it is quite more efficient than sentences.
On the other hand
, a
picture
can prove authenticity. There is no doubt that more and more press would use exaggerated sentences to depict the stories in order to capture the attention of readers. If there is a
picture
which was recorded the true situation that happened,
then
the whole news would be more reliable.
For instance
, In 2020, there was a rebellion in HONGKONG, there is a Western press report that one of the police
officer
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threatens the civilians with a gun.
AS a result
, a photo posted on the TIKTOK shows there are some
people
throwing a chemical tool toward to police officer.
Picture
not only can prove the truth but
also
limited the fake new publishing . To conclude, the
picture
along with an article could help
people
get a better understanding of the occurrence,
also
can prove the authenticity of the news which is more efficient than sentences.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
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