You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear John, My name is David Miller, I have recently moved to your neighbourhood in house no.32-b. I am writing

this

letter in the context of the house warming party that I am planning to organise

this

weekend at my house. The party will commence at 8.30 PM till midnight on 25th March. I have got appropriate permission from the concerned authorities for the event.

Moreover

, I am a melophile

thus

, I have booked a Famous DJ Rock band for it . As the party will go on till late at night, I am a bit worried that maybe you get annoyed by loud music

hence

, I am kindly requested you to please bear

this

for one night.

Moreover

, I am

also

inviting you and your family to join us and give your blessings and warm wishes. I really want to mark your presence and I am one once again in advance apologise for any inconvenience. Your Friendly, David

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that governments should take care of unemployed. Do you agree /disagree.

Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Television dominates the free time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situations?