You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter, -Explain how you heard about the job -Describe the kind of job you would like to have -Give details of your experience and qualifications

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the

store

manager

position

that you advertised in The Sunday Morning newspaper

last

Monday. I found

this

position

suits my future career aspiration as I have been working as a

store

manager

assistant

for almost 4 years now. I am keen to take up new challenges with more responsibilities like the

position

you advertised. I have been working in the retail industry for more than 8 years, which includes the

assistant

position

I mentioned earlier. I started to work as a

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storekeeper

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store keeper

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storekeeper

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at a small clothing

store

outside of Sydney city right after my graduation from the design faculty of the University of New South Wales. I quickly get promoted as a senior fashion specialist because many customers felt satisfied with my service, and it generated a sustainable profit for the small

store

. Not very long after, the

store

manager hired me as the

assistant

to replace the previous

assistant

who left the company, and that because my performance was excellent too. Thank you for your attention and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Sur

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